Ivan: nice melody but please use more of other notes
Johan: no pause, kind of boring, and no variation
Michelle: nice melody
Olivia: nice melody, good variation and easy to remember
Sarah: good variation and nice melody
Esther: good variation and nice melody
Tatiana: not a very good ending and need more variations on the notes
Yoshiko: the melody is fine but still need more variation on the notes
Today, i only watched my friends' composition, most of their compositions are good but i think they still have to fix it a little bit. I think the best composition is Olivia because the melody is very good. While watching their compositions, i write feedback for their compositions then later i will put it in my blog. At home, i will practice my final composition and i will update my blog.
Appreciate your quick upload on the blog right away still on the day you had the class.
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